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Critique and comment on artwork
Sat Dec 03, 2011, 08:37 PM
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Critique and comment on artwork
[/php]Its been hell of a long time since I came on AA I've recently been delving into Digital art and I've been wanting to know how well or how bad I'm doing
Soo here goes

Most recent one "Fight Your Demons" :
http://d.facdn.net/art/meanxtreamx3/1322...wnload.jpg

War The Shards :

http://d.facdn.net/art/meanxtreamx3/1322...wnload.jpg

Well that's all I dare show now anyway hope you lot can give me some input on how to improve Winking. Thx a lot!

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Mon Dec 05, 2011, 12:03 AM
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RE: Critique and comment on artwork
(Sat Dec 03, 2011 08:37 PM)FolskyGab123 Wrote:  Its been hell of a long time since I came on AA I've recently been delving into Digital art and I've been wanting to know how well or how bad I'm doing
Too long indeed, till I forgot which was your last artwork you posted here Tongue

Quote:Most recent one "Fight Your Demons"
I would suggest going easy on the blur/smudge effects. Usually those are bad in expressing the emotions or actions in the artwork. Try to focus on its linework, those seem pretty impressive, but quite hidden behind the shroud of excessive blur :/

Quote:War The Shards
This piece is certainly much clearer and more effective in depicting the scene compared to the previous one. More focus on the characters' actions and motions and light on the glow and lighting effects. Certainly, you need a little more experience and time practicing and you can fine tune those glow and sparks closer to realistic depiction Winking
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Mon Dec 05, 2011, 04:50 PM
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RE: Critique and comment on artwork
Thx for the critique , I see now which areas of my craft I can perfect!

So far I think im getting better at digital art, it's weird to draw without using a stylus

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Tue Dec 27, 2011, 01:24 PM
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Just recently added this piece to my gallery, Would love some feedback!

http://www.furaffinity.net/view/7089525/

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Tue Dec 27, 2011, 11:26 PM (This post was last modified: Tue Dec 27, 2011 11:26 PM by Canis Enigmas.)
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That's a pretty impressive effort in replicating different artist styles ... till I was tempted to think some characters were "traced" >Big smile
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Fri Dec 30, 2011, 12:02 AM
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Wow! now i wouldnt have expected such a comment! <3 thank you


And yes i did my best to mimic their styles for effect
theres no way to assure you they were not traced ...unless i get livestream .

Anyway , your comments have helped me to identify my flaws and rectify them effectively Smile
im currently working on a number of requests and i would love to post some of them here for some helpful input Smile thanks!

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Fri Dec 30, 2011, 09:39 PM
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Okay i had this recently submitted Smile

Id love some feedback!

http://www.furaffinity.net/view/7123321/

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